We did some writing this afternoon and worked with a partner to make revisions. Our partners asked us questions which helped us add more details to our paragraphs.
We wrote about our lunches. Ask your child to make up a sentence about dinner the way we made a paragraph about lunch.
Some students helped me write this sentence about my lunch: I gulped down a mouth-watering tomato, pesto and mozzarella sandwich.
Just so you don't think it's all work, all day, here is a picture of some of us enjoying Four Square on the playground:
Comments (7)
Wow Mrs. Raper's class!!! You sure have been busy learning! I am looking forward to studying Sunflowers with you in the upcoming weeks! See you next Wednesday.
Love, Mrs. Wright
Posted by Donna Wright | August 23, 2012 5:39 PM
Posted on August 23, 2012 17:39
*The vegetables on my plate were red and yellow. They remind me of the sun in the morning.*
I heard that Parker read his lunch poem and did a great job. I need someone to teach me four square too, it looks like fun!
Posted by DonnaB | August 23, 2012 5:56 PM
Posted on August 23, 2012 17:56
Everything in life is better, I think, when it's done w/ a buddy. I've heard A LOT about Four Square so far this year. . .looks like fun!
Posted by Amy Austin | August 23, 2012 7:05 PM
Posted on August 23, 2012 19:05
Wish I could go back to school and be in Mrs. Raper's class. Lucky kids!
Posted by Linda McPhail | August 23, 2012 7:30 PM
Posted on August 23, 2012 19:30
What a fun assignment! I can't wait to hear them. Mrs. Raper's class looks like a great place to be.
Posted by Amy Zimmerman | August 24, 2012 1:38 PM
Posted on August 24, 2012 13:38
Hi, Mrs. Raper's class! It looks like your days are full of wonderful learning opportunities! Working with a buddy is always fun! And, I'm glad to see that you are all working together on the playground, too, as you learn new fun games...like 4 square!
Posted by Frances Beasley | August 30, 2012 11:39 PM
Posted on August 30, 2012 23:39
Hi, Mrs. Raper's class! It looks like your days are full of wonderful learning opportunities! Working with a buddy is always fun! And, I'm glad to see that you are all working together on the playground, too, as you learn new fun games...like 4 square!
Posted by Frances Beasley | August 30, 2012 11:39 PM
Posted on August 30, 2012 23:39